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I never ment to break you
for everything I've done
for you to think I never ment
but with every breath I drew
for alll it took to make you see that I love you

But my tears are fallin'
and through my distant callin'
I never ment this
never wanted it to go down
like this

you've been in my heart
even through all these days
we've been apart
now as i slowly watch
you and me fade away
to a darker place where
my heart beats a faint,numb pace

i'll always love you and believe
me that'll stay true
cause if i lose you i know there's
nothing i can do
to gain everything back but
im willing to make this worth the fight
i know i can try to make this right
©2007-2009 ~angelvicky13
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Submitted: November 15, 2007
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sumthin i wrote after i got into an argument with sum1
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~5o5:icon5o5: Nov 16, 2007, 10:32:49 AM Mood: Love
nice =]

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smiling when dying inside...
~angelvicky13:iconangelvicky13: Nov 17, 2007, 4:40:57 AM
thnks

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'Cause it's not my time,
I'm not going
There's a fear in me
It's not showing
This could be the end of me
And everything I know
Oh, I won't go
~5o5:icon5o5: Nov 18, 2007, 9:49:18 AM
np

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smiling when dying inside...
~angelvicky13:iconangelvicky13: Nov 22, 2007, 9:03:13 AM
=)

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'Cause it's not my time,
I'm not going
There's a fear in me
It's not showing
This could be the end of me
And everything I know
Oh, I won't go
=Gokimanga:iconGokimanga: Nov 29, 2007, 4:58:56 PM
hmm...needs a bit more work! you should be careful when you use run-on lines, and try making it in a iambic pentameter! It will sound much better!

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anime is as addictive as sex...
but there's no orgasm to tell you when to stop.
~angelvicky13:iconangelvicky13: Nov 30, 2007, 12:34:49 PM
alright thnks i have it re written as lyrical form but im working on a finald draft of that b4 i post it

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'Cause it's not my time,
I'm not going
There's a fear in me
It's not showing
This could be the end of me
And everything I know
Oh, I won't go
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